First Person POV Attack/Block

This is the start of my next project! ^u^

I think you might be able to guess where this is going. haha

Tell me what you think and I am open to opinions and suggestions.

Edit:

Here is the other one for a character you would be looking at:
anime-halo.deviantart.com/art/…

EDIT:

Here is the one that combines them both:
anime-halo.deviantart.com/art/…